Cole marble story 1/72013

Once upon a time there was a twelve year old boy named Josh Kaine. He never had a good time at school because there were two bullies. They always started fights, humiliated him and stole his lunch money. But these bullies were smart and always got out of trouble somehow.

Josh was on his way home, the two bullies were sitting in a bush around the corner. They had laid out clear marbles. The plan was that Josh would walk around the corner and one of the boys would chase him,  He would sprint along and trip on the marbles. Josh stepped around the corner and one of the boys jumped out and chased him. Josh - being the school's fastest sprinter - thought he could sprint home and call the police to end this. He reached the marbles and one slipped under his foot. But he hit the marble funny and catapulted 0.9 meters into the air and did a half front flip. Did I mention that Josh just got back from brain surgery because of a brain tumor?  Nek Minute bang!! Joshes head split in half!  A big crimson pool gathered around his head.  The boys stood there stunned, Josh didn't make a sound. The boys both ran away. A car was going past and saw Josh and the boys running away. The man wound down the window and tried to ask the boys what was going on, but they kept running. The man rang an ambulance. They tracked down the boys and they got sentenced to life at Arizona max prison.          
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Cole      

On Thursday each group made a muesli bar (sort of) we got some oats seeds nuts and more and mixed in with some toffee. we put the mixture into the fridge till it got semi hard. we pulled it out and cut it up. most of the

ok wheel her back down and i'll give it ago I shout. OK Daniel said i grab the crf 80 and kick it over. I thought this was going to be easy and this guy just wasn't a good rider,`` but then i saw his tiers they were almost the same is slicks! i plough through the watery bog at the bottom then hit the hill. i get half way up but the wheels cake with mud and i slip over. I get off and give pushing ago but i slip over. then we Both have ago but slip over. i began to get frustrated and had one more go, but it ended up in the same result. In the end i tell him to slowly ride back.

Whoosh!! as the wind brushes past my brand new EVS vortex helmet. Neeee! Neeee! As my KX 85 blasts through a straight, long paddock at 125 kms an hour. Dad and I have a race through the paddock, But Dad easily wastes me, because, when he was younger he used to race all the time and he used to win, Plus I have 23 horse power and he has 54 horse power! Dad is riding his big KTM 525 and I'm riding my KX 85. We are at the Apiti trial ride and we are flying! We approach a big hill section. I think to myself this is my favorite part of each trial ride. I start off about 30 meters from the hill, click her in to first gear, pull in the clutch.....      

Cole- Sam Strahan

Rip 1!... rip 2!.... rip 3!....  rip 4!.... rip 5! 5th and final rip!.......rip turn over! yes I whisper. 2  Poppy shouts Brendon races up to Poppy and she pops it over to him. We all run in an angled line behind  Brendon, he makes it through the first few people but then he gets ripped he passes it straight to Tom. He gets into trouble and passes it to me, I side step two people then get ripped. I flick it off to Jamie and she scores a try. Kiwitea start off and my defence instinct kicks in. Olivia sprints with the ball in her right hand and I jump forward and rip her then she passes it to some one else and I rip them straight away. The ball ends up in someone elses hands and i rip them instantly. My group goes in for the next three rips and its our turn over. tom rushes in gets the ball and scores a try. The hooter sounds and the game is over. we won!        

Camp recount 2013

Kapiti ... A beautiful place. Birds chirping, trees rustling, ocean colliding with the rocky shore. Every thing so peaceful.... Brum!! as the two outboard engines start up. The skipper sprays us with sea water.
We make our way to the lodge and set up our portable houses(tents). We have the largest tent. Our ten is full of boys. There is Tom, Zahn, Huntah and I.
Swimming time! "Yea!" every one yells. I race into our tent and jump into some togs. We arrive at the sea. I hop into the freezing water, dunk my head under and explore.
Wow! I see a big school of fish floating past, paua blending in with the pink rocks, sea weed waving around and Tom's legs dangling from underneath a log. I lift up my head to hear Tom shouting, "Come on maties! Let's conker New Zealand. Get on your logs and sail away with me!"
After 5 minutes of him screaming I give in and join him.
"Oh noooo!" Tom shouts, "I'm sinking!"
He doggie paddled over to my boat. He sat on the front and the nose began to go under.
"Nooo!" he screamed. "Abandon ship!"
We are forced to swim back to shore. This camp is awesome!                   

Camp recount 1

"You four are our older ones and you have the choice to go up the trig track.yea!" we screamed.
I thought it was going to be easy but I was wrong. The start was easy it was a smooth slightly up hill  

cole recount

I now Pronounce you, Husband and Wife! yea!! woo!  the crowd screams like crazy. We evacuate the wedding area and end up in the partying area.The caterers come out with delicious mini sandwiches and I nearly eat all of them!Josh, Logan, Another Josh, And me All run to the  

Cole trial ride 25.2.12

Move it i say quietly in my helmet, as some kid on CRF 100 stops randomly on the steepest hill of the ride.After about 2 minutes he starts moving again. I pass him as soon as we get to the bottom of the hill. Dad is right by my side doing a massive wheelie to show off. We hit this gnarly bit where all the quads stalled and didnt make it up, Neither did some of the younger kids. Ill describe the scene. It had a massive dip then an almost 90.c turn on the side of a steep hill.I Gun it as soon as i hit the dip and just make it up. We travel on.. Until we hit this rut section and a dude trys to cut in front me but falls over!I clip his wheel and almost fall over myself!      

Cole Napier skate park 23.10.12

Swoosh!! “Woho! A full 360!" 
Whoops! I end up with a face full of foam. I drag my self out of the endless pit of foam. Bang! My feet collide with the ground. I slowly crawl my way up the steep ramp. Now I'm rushing down at a million miles an hour! (That translated into Kilometres is one million six hundred and 1 thousand Kilometres an hour!) 
I leave the ground the moment I hit the tip of the ramp. I aim to get a double tail whip…. And I succeed! Then I decide to try something new. I zoom down the ramp at full speed then I soar through the cold air. This is where the trick comes in. I leave the scooter in mid air but I spin 360 degrees. I desperately try to grasp at my scooter but I failed. 
“Cole!" Dad shouts.

 “Yeah”, I reply.

 “Time to go!"

 “Nooooooo! "    

New Plymouth

Reevvvvvv!! As every ones eyes are dazzled and surprised
"Wow!" everyone calls. "How do you do that?"
"It has electric motors on either wheel and i have a remote control," grandad says proudly.
"Hey nana, can i have something to eat?"
"Sure come in the camper van."
One meal later... somewhere at the pool.
"Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!" i scream as i plumete down to the bottom of a massive drop. Straight after i soar round a corner and my shoulder hits a small joiner gap. It sends me spinning!
Then i come to a halt and actually have to push my self round a corner! Then i pick up speed, hit another corner and another and finally i make a mess of Nana's clothes by soaking her in water.
Yep, you guessed it, the pools in New Plymouth.

Cole-my story

A faint tingling feeling creeps down my spine as I rise to the surface of a deep, deep sleep. Soon Ican't stop myself from shaking with excitement. Now my eyes burst open as if someone has attached a electric fence to me in my sleep.My stiff muscles tense as I rise from my sweet, soft, sympathetic bed. My knee is excruciatingly painful from a dirt bike accident in a race.

As the time passes I find myself in my Thor motocross top and my monster,Thor and vans motocross pants. Now I'm making dad a coffee. I still remember how he likes it, like he only told me yesterday.... wait it was only yesterday.
Rearea rearea rearea!! What's that noise? For moment I start to worry but only to find dad trying to start a honda CRF 230. He rented it from AFC motorcycles Palmerston North. 
Finally it fires and starts with a mighty roar. And now... Introducing the greatest birthday and christmas present.. my pride and joy(apart from my family) my KX 85!. Dad with a mighty heave pushes the 230 on to our ute and then my 85. I can barely help myself from screaming out with joy. Now its time to start the unbearable trip to Tikaria mx track
Ding da da ding ding ding is the sound of my 22 horse power kx 85. Brum brum is the sound of the CRF 230.Then the revs on both our bikes rise slightly to warm them up. 
Let me describe the track, gumboot high of sand and mud and tons of deep as ruts bigger than my mini 5 year old dog.My heart races as the adreneline pumps through it.(this is after about 8 laps of getting used to the track) Half throttle fist gear dump the clutch.Now we're both trying to keep our front wheels on the ground. Now here shifting up gear. 1st, 2nd, 3rd and then sometimes 4th . I drift round the burn slightly, hit a straight, go round another corner, I have a go at a really big table top which is bit more than 3 quarters the size of our class room and I get about half way. I clear a mini table top and then head up a hill that is really step on the way back down, At the top there is a root and I hit the root and jump half the way down the steep hill, Now I have approached a forest and I race through it then turn a rough corner and soar past the finish line.
Under my sweat soaked gear, Under my skull my brain is so rapt I can't keep up with my own thoughts!         

Cole's new kx 85 story

As I rush out of school, I sprint so fast that my legs nearly fall off ! I jump in the car and mum steps on the gas and in no time we are at the church. I was going on a test ride on a kx 85 2 stroke! It has twice the horse power as my DRZ 125. As I leapt into dad's car all of my excitement drained. He said he didn't  have time to pick it up. The car roared to life and we surged forward and continued on home. 
When we arrived home dad called me to the shed. Then I saw a faint green thing. Dad told me to turn the light on and then there was a long silence. I turned to dad to find him staring at me with a massive smile. The green thing was a 07 Kawasaki kx 85 race bike. Then puzzled, I asked what it was doing here. 
He said it was mine!

Hamner Springs

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Ahh! My mind screams as I'm forced back into my seat when the jet engines roar to life. We're speeding down the runway at well over 150 kms an hour, gaining more and more speed. Then finally we leave the ground and meet a new terrain; the air. After a while the flight captain announced that the flight attendants would be handing out mini chocolate bars, BBQ chips, water and an oat meal biscuit. Logan and I chose the mini chocolate bar. 
What felt like ten minutes was actually about half an hour. The plane wheels met the ground and let off a massive groan. Then a massive pain occurred in my head. It felt like some one shot me in the temples! 
A few unbearable moments later. Ahh! It still hurts!
A few more unbearable moments later! Finally we screech to a halt as we arrive in Christchurch!
Now the massive search for Nana has began. It's like a jungle in here. Tall men are like the trees that tower over you. Lion cubs are the little kids yelling and play fighting. Then there are the monkeys jumping from tree to tree. Different lots of little kids represent them jumping from seat to seat. The planes are like birds about to take off. Finding Nana is like finding a needle in a haystack.
Then suddenly I see her white hair and glasses and she notices us and gives a wave. 
Then the long car trip to Hamner began.